Fruity Loops Begginer...
I can tell you're starting out just by the sound of it. The song was a bit too quiet, and the second synth, the one that came in after the drums, doesn't really fit for 'trance'. The drums you chose could have used a bit more life. I liked the hi-hat beat. You needed a baseline.
Anyways, good job for just starting out. Keep working at it. Hopefully you'll get better faster than I do.
thanks! ill be sure to keep workin and making new songs as well
p.s. you should heard the first version, IT WAS HORRIBLE
Sexcellent.
Don't peel the skin off my ass or anything for this, but I SOMEWHAT agree with the pair (Or more? I don't know) who said your music sounds well similar all together. Now there are some significant differences between them all, but you could try working on originality. Try making a song that's like alot different from everything else.
Maybe I should be taking some of my own advice, but oh well...
Now, I'm going to forget all of your songs exist, and talk about just this one. Nice cut off effects. I love those. The bass is really nice. The drums are cool too. Oo! I love that little guitar sound too. This would be a nice song to dance too(if I could dance). I love how it goes quiet on some parts. I also like it how it kinda "dies off" at the end.
Sexcellent job.
P.S. Please don't go into an explosion of anger because of the criticism I made.
Why would I do that? I must say I disagree with mindless banter from the inept, but critisism is what I actually want, so thank you. ( Even though you were kind of annoying with the anger thing ;) )
I'll bet with practice you'll get better...
I gave you a three... I have decided to give you a helpful (In my opinion) review. Your song was fuzzy and very unclear, which is why you got so low in clarity. Diversity, was pretty good, although the 4 by 4 drum beat dragged on over and over forever without change. It was different throught the song, but always sounded fuzzy, and no offense but, boring. For effort, it sounded half assed... When you try on something it shows.
Nice try.
Well I'd have to say the reason it sounded fuzzy was becuase of the medium. It sounds clear on my my hardrive, Anywayz am gonna try hard on currrently working on a remix and I'll try to mix it up a bit more
I can't say it was stolen but...
This is mostly not your work. What you did was take a bunch of things from fruity loops (made by true music creators) and threw it all together in one big turd of an audio file. I don't think you made any melody or beat that was your own. The rap at the beggining, was just something that somebody else put through a fruity vocoder plugin. I'm going to find out where the main beat that plays throught the whole song is from, beacuase as a fruity loops user I have heard such things before.
In summary, you took a bunch of loops (Drums, synth, base, whatever.) and through them together. I have the urge to report this as stolen, but I'm not sure if it would be valid.
If anyone reads this, boycott this fraud and "his" music.
I never said I made the loops. Sorry, I should have said that. I'll make sure to do that on my next song! ;)
Needs improvement. But good.
Okay so I just started listening to it... Kinda a weak intro, a little, well... boring. I guess with the sound on a higher volume it isn't so bad.
The drums were pretty good. The bass melody is pretty good, but the sound of the bass could use more energy. Yes that's it, try to put more energy into your songs. Pretty good though.
i was focusing on sound quality more than a good melody on this song, and i achived it.
I liked the drums
The drums were good, the bell thinger was annoying, and the other synths were okay, sorta annoying, you could keep the patterns you used, but try a different plugin like "Wasp" or "Sytrus" or something sexy like that.
Ok. I'll remove the bells. .:Disconnected 2:. on its way!
Nice, only a few things need to fix.
It was... well kinda boring, well the drum-beats were nice, I liked the synth pattern you used at the beggining. Clarity is where you kinda bombed, though. I said I liked the patter of the beginning synth, but the synth itself was too fuzzy/unclear. Throw in a bass of some sort, it might be better. It was pretty good, but kinda sleepy sounding. I guess I'm saying that because I preferr fast paced music.
P.S. Hail to fruityloops!
well it kinda suppose to be fuzzy. and there is a bass..its just a little fuzzy aswell :P
'Twas very 1337.
Incredibly sexcellent like the first. Really different but similar. Thanks for not throwing a chicken at me (What's with that?). It's like secks in a can. Nice job.
dude the chicken is an inside joke wit my friends
OH MY RAWD
THIS IS FARKING AMAZAING!!!!!! IT MAKES ME WANT TO STALK YOU! Not really but still. AWSOME! I love it. Sounds so awsome. I can't describe why I love it. I just do. Aw it just kicks. I love it. Oh my rawd. Crazy good. I'm going to download it (OF COURSE). I love you. And your song. Make more, it will brighten my life.
ok dude if u wanna know i made this song totally randomly. Beleive it or not. i just sat down and said, "Hey, i need sum rave..." and i made this. So ty, u make me wanna make more of this, and now i dont have to throw a chicken at you.
The kind of song you could listen to forever
I could listen to this for an eternity and it would never get old. It's very original, as you have most likely learned already, but I wouldn't call it trance. Try music: miscillaneous, but then again, no one listens to music under that catagory anyways. This song almost soounds satanic, and I can swear you back-masked subliminal messages in there. The song wasn't repetative at all from what I could see, and if it was repetetive then I didn't notice because it wasn't annoying.
Hepp!
Nah, misc. is for other stuff, this maybe aint trance, but i still think its the category that fits the best here on NG. There are many evil subliminal messages (or is there?) in this song. To find them, listen to the song 666 times in a row in a blackpainted room with pink and brown flashing lights. repeat the demon name "Garlashufellguuhxzarrgelarrdzz" along with the rythm in the song, while u´re standing on your head, tapping your left foot on a shaved racoon from 1954 and letting steam come out from your ear. Growl! :D
Really glad u liked the song man, and make sure u try out the evil ritual mohahahahahaha :D
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