Excellent!!!
This was brilliant, absolutley awsome, theres just only two real flaws I can find, the text, or dialogue, passes by painfully slow, unless of course, your presenting to a group of five year olds with atention defficate disorder. The only other thing I could find 'annoying' so to speak, was the way the prisoner spoke, I found it sort of corny, but hey thats not really important. Excellent job indeed.